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m48
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since 2009-12-02
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0 posted 2010-01-04 03:15 PM



as the clock strikes 19 years past
finding more reasons no to laugh
wanting change so bad
having the design in mind
shelves of black
walls of pastel green
instead of prison stripes
or so it sometimes seems
a rug to cover a carpet of eraser pink
green baskets for the black shelves
a purple and black bed
this is where creativity
can breath
the clock strikes 19 years past
to an artist
this room is a huge block
cant think or be free
change is needed apsoulutly
its happening slowly

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kjsd
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sd usa
1 posted 2010-01-07 06:15 PM


this is really good i loved it
m48
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2 posted 2010-01-08 11:25 AM


thank you for the comment.
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