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just like a tattoo
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just like a tattoo |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
it stings at first when you puncture skin then you get used to it soon its so beautyful something so perminent something thats forever it stays with you no matter which road you take it dosent care where you go its there on ur heart for all to see just like a tattoo __________________ comments are encouraged! |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Maybe it's just me, but I don't get it. “All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like the thoughts here, but if you could expand on it maybe, try to expand the metaphor and tell us what you are comparing tattoos to. Love? Heartache?  |
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kjsd Member
since 2010-01-07
Posts 74sd usa |
isn't it a song and i dont get it |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
I think each person has a different view of this poem. I, myself, am thinking it is about heartbreak that wounds your heart but you keep living and you realize that all wounds close all cuts heal. And all your left of that person is a scar just like a tatoo. May not of been the authors idea of what they were writing but each mind is different. I really enjoyed the poem even if it wasn't that of my perception. I really hope to see more of it's standerd from you, m48, in the future.  M |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
thank you all so much for posting.i didnt think this one would get much feed back.and as far as meaning goes madelyn pretty much hit it. thank you again and i hope you all keep reading my work! |
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