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m48
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0 posted 2010-01-01 01:33 PM





it stings at first when you puncture skin
then you get used to it
soon its so beautyful
something so perminent
something thats forever
it stays with you
no matter which road you take
it dosent care where you go
its there on ur heart for all to see
just like a tattoo


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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 2010-01-09 12:49 PM


Maybe it's just me, but I don't get it.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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2 posted 2010-01-09 11:20 AM


I like the thoughts here, but if you could expand on it maybe, try to expand the metaphor and tell us what you are comparing tattoos to. Love? Heartache?


kjsd
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3 posted 2010-01-09 11:21 AM



isn't it a song and i dont get it

madelyn
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4 posted 2010-01-10 08:13 PM


I think each person has a different view of this poem. I, myself, am thinking it is about heartbreak that wounds your heart but you keep living and you realize that all wounds close all cuts heal. And all your left of that person is a scar just like a tatoo.

May not of been the authors idea of what they were writing but each mind is different.

I really enjoyed the poem even if it wasn't that of my perception.

I really hope to see more of it's standerd from you, m48, in the future.

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m48
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5 posted 2010-01-12 03:30 PM


thank you all so much for posting.i didnt think this one would get much feed back.and as far as meaning goes madelyn pretty much hit it.
thank you again and i hope you all keep reading my work!

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