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Teen Poetry #9
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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
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0 posted 2010-01-01 09:12 AM


I'm lost
Lost and crying

I'm lost
Waiting for you

I'm lost
I cant find my way back to my sanity

I'm lost
Don't lead me

I'm lost
Why should I carry on
I'm lost
Can this get any worse

I'm lost
Just stop lying

I'm lost
Just stop trying

I'm lost
Nobody can find me

I'm lost
Just stop looking

I’m lost
And I am the reason why

I'm lost
Lost and crying
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Snow_Angel
Junior Member
since 2009-12-18
Posts 17
1 posted 2010-01-08 08:00 PM

This is great. I love the writing style. Some writers couldn't pull it off, (me), but you did.
kjsd
Member
since 2010-01-07
Posts 74
sd usa
2 posted 2010-01-09 11:26 AM

good job i would not be able to do that
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