Teen Poetry #9 |
A Poem For My Mother |
madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
I wrote this poem for my mum for christmas. *** Many people aren’t as lucky as me, For nobody has a mother as good as mine. I hope to be like her in all her shine, Although I would like to be able to make a meal to dine. But she is mine, My mother. Sugar and spice and everything nice, She keeps a hidden recipe for ice. She may not be the smartest And has a child who’s a smartass But she is mine, My mother Until the very end, I’ll always have a friend, My mother. *** |
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ThatOneGuy Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 33Indiana, United States |
i like this alot. it is a different structure than i am used to seeing and i think it works well for you. good job |
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