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Teen Poetry #9

so close.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-12-19 07:12 AM

I don't know who I am in here
And I've never felt quite as real
But i think it was worth it
to know i was so close.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-12-19 08:23 PM

Zach this is a great piece. I bet about 10 different times in my life, I felt this way. Still am a work in progress

Well done!

Happy Holidays
♥ Mysteria ♥

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

2 posted 2009-12-21 11:33 AM

short and to the point i like it. good work

Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

3 posted 2009-12-21 10:44 PM

for so little words, this peice sure made me think alot! it could be interpreted so many different ways, i loved it

-Lee

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