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Past Tense Angel
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Past Tense Angel |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Can you see her? The girl with those sad, cold, haunted eyes Can you hear her? The words she sings The way she speaks What do you feel when she walks by? Sometimes I wonder What exactly went wrong Somehow I know She once was the words to your song She was quite the nice distraction You were heaven in her eyes She hung to your every word The way she laughed The way she spoke Do you remember the way That distant girl used to be? She sees you She remembers Sometimes I wonder How she could've done so much wrong Somehow I know You were the words To her favourite song Did you really love that girl? When she had those wide, innocent eyes? Did you hear the words she said? She talked about you Thinks bout you Couldn't and sometimes Can’t stand bein’ without you Remember how you looked into her wide, innocent, icy-blue eyes? And told her She was everything you ever wanted You remembered every golden word she ever said You couldn't stand being without her You wanted to start and never end Can you see yourself in those sad, cold, haunted eyes? |
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asarosestoleherattention Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 15england |
wow. this is amazing. very meaningful. i think i understand it, but either way, thats some really good work. <3 natalie fairbrace ('r) |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Ohh how i love this.. The emotion and feelings.. truely amazing!! |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
thanks bunches guys.  it's actually a sequel (sort of) to my previous 'Wide, innocent eyes' |
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