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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2009-11-03 12:29 PM


Hey, so here's another poem. Let me know what you think and maybe help me with a title. Thanks

Another night in my room
It's always the same
I hear his footsteps outside my door
I hear him call my name
Shivering and shaking
Here comes the fear
On his breath I can always smell the beer
Trying not to breathe
Wondering whats next
The whole time I'm staring at the exposed hair on his chest
I scream and fight to get free
It's no use, it wont work
This has to happen to me
After he's done and my soul feels gone
I think about what I could've done wrong
I cry to myself wondering "why me??"
I wish he would die and leave me be
Even if he did, I wouldn't be set free
He put a child inside of me
Ill live this nightmare all through my life
No matter what, Ill live in fright.
Hoping someday that he'll go away
I know he won't because she wants him to stay
It makes me want to die
So I can hide whats growing inside
Worried all the time that someone will guess
Why I hate him the best
Its because of what he's done to me
Making me a mother to be.

© Copyright 2009 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2009-11-03 06:34 PM


Hey hunni...

Is this an old poem or are u pregnant again??

BTW how is Jess??

HersheyKiss
Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey
2 posted 2009-11-03 06:54 PM


Hey!!!
Jess is doing good. Starting to walk she's getting so big. I'll send you a picture.
How are you and Amelia doing?

precious pearls
Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
3 posted 2009-11-11 04:32 PM


OMG love it!!!! beautiful, very honest....
BTW how are you? and are you pregnant agian?
hope to talk to you soon!
-kai

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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