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UNTAMEDelegance
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0 posted 2009-10-26 10:43 PM


The pristine,
the cool, soft night.
The folding dark,
the sweet starlight.

I breathe the air;
so light, so cool
and stare into
the moon's bright pool.

A breeze comes through,
in flows the air
and ruffles through
my unbound hair.

It feels so safe,
the night will keep.
I gently sigh
and fall asleep.

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1 posted 2009-10-27 04:28 AM


beautiful flow
Krysti

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2 posted 2009-10-27 07:12 PM


very amazing poem,
flows brilliantly.
x

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

asarosestoleherattention
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since 2009-10-27
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3 posted 2009-10-27 07:12 PM


very amazing poem,
flows brilliantly.
x

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

asarosestoleherattention
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since 2009-10-27
Posts 15
england
4 posted 2009-10-27 07:12 PM


very amazing poem,
flows brilliantly.
x

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

asarosestoleherattention
Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 15
england
5 posted 2009-10-27 07:13 PM


beautiful poem,
flows brilliantly
x

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

asarosestoleherattention
Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 15
england
6 posted 2009-10-27 07:13 PM


beautiful poem,
flows brilliantly
x

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

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