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don't ask me
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don't ask me |
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lilmissflyaway Junior Member
since 2009-01-19
Posts 15ohio,usa |
i have no idea so don't ask me for i don't have a clue there's no sign to leadme on my way no way to be sure but the choice is mine It's within me carring me on my way through everything and it seems that everything always leads back to you but don't ask cause i still dont have a clude dont ask me |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Welcome to Pip! I'm glad to see another poet on here to share their work. The poem you have written is pretty good for a first post! -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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i3n07red12 New Member
since 2009-01-27
Posts 6Brunei |
hey good poem.. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I like the idea. The poem itself could use a little work, but I'm not one to critique on that. Nice first post. |
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