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0 posted 2009-10-10 10:53 AM


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Your beauty goes beyond comprehension
Its dazzles me pass my wit
Like the last finishing puzzle piece
in your arms; I feel this fits.

Under the veil of sleep
I feel your every touch
Your warmth against my skin
You whisper lovingly as such

Though I must be dreaming
On some narcotic high
I know I'll just fall
from this sleeping lullaby


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1 posted 2009-10-10 01:29 PM


Awe =C
I like this,
nice write.

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EmilyTheStrange
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2 posted 2009-10-13 11:04 AM


It had a very nice rhythm to it. A bit bouncing and slightly upbeat. A nice refresher to my day. Gracias hombre.
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