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Teen Poetry #9

Beautiful Nightmare

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-10-10 10:53 AM

Your beauty goes beyond comprehension
Its dazzles me pass my wit
Like the last finishing puzzle piece
in your arms; I feel this fits.

Under the veil of sleep
I feel your every touch
Your warmth against my skin
You whisper lovingly as such

Though I must be dreaming
On some narcotic high
I know I'll just fall
from this sleeping lullaby

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2009-10-10 01:29 PM

Awe =C
I like this,
nice write.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
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...popsicle!

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2009-10-13 11:04 AM

It had a very nice rhythm to it. A bit bouncing and slightly upbeat. A nice refresher to my day. Gracias hombre.

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