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Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal
0 posted 2009-10-05 02:43 AM


Off Ten Beat


Pink lashes all around
blue spots alternating.

rain drops, thick like mud;
layers of penultimate glaze.

Egg-white hankie dabbing off
blotching sunrise speckles
preparing for twilight scars

Nobody likes a beating.


9/30/09
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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
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india
1 posted 2009-10-06 11:36 AM

Ah! that is so true...
who indeed likes a beating!!
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