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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
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0 posted 2009-09-25 03:33 PM



Twin storms in her eyes,
sucking me in like
A Black hole.

She has a voice,
like an angels;
Beautiful.

To say “I love you”,
would be an
Understatement.

The sun enhancine,
her Features,
her Face.

Death could not part my eyes from her,
neither could they if I were blind.
Because after seeing her, I knew she was the one.

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1 posted 2009-09-26 03:17 PM


beautiful
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