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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india

0 posted 2009-09-24 01:50 PM


You came to me
And stole my heart
You said no word
And it broke my heart

You showed up as if on a cue
As if just nothing anew
Bereft me my mind
There is nothing more to me bind

To this place you call world
Where frozen expressions their faces hold
All I despise, nothing but cold
Not one I see who tries not, they withhold

To be what they want to be
They hide under colourful canopy
Different shades of green I see
Why don't they go and let me be
Just why can't you see

That for you I beared all I could
If there ever be that we would
Be together I thought it be true
With those thoughts I grew

And now I'm left with nothing
No bondage to the world
No conflicting thoughts restraining
Unleash myself, no need to mold

This pretended life be dead
It goes all above my head
There is nothing much left to be said
For I just can't get undead

[This message has been edited by priyanka (09-25-2009 12:20 PM).]

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2009-09-26 02:14 AM


Ah, I'm jealous

Beautiful.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

priyanka
Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
2 posted 2009-09-26 05:20 PM


Did you think so?
THANK YOU! N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
I'm glad you liked it

precious pearls
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since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
3 posted 2009-09-27 07:00 PM


another fantastic one! Had me tearing up in stuff- u def. hav talent, shud enter a contest or somethin

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

priyanka
Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
4 posted 2009-10-04 04:48 PM


thnk you .... that is really nice of you to say so...
glad you liked it

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