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0 posted 2009-09-17 03:38 AM


(I felt this one was more for teens, even though technically I'm an adult (18) I still feel like a Teenager.)


It's just a pencil
You said it again
I laughed
I smiled
I joked
It's just a pencil
Yeah, it's just a pencil

Every day, it was just a pencil
Every day, it was just a smile
Every day, it was you

Give me a moment to spy you in the halls
Give me a moment to smell your perfume

I'm falling in love with you

You don't even know

It makes me laugh

'cause you'll never know

Even if I did all I could to show

It'd be like twisting a knot in a rainbow

You wouldn't see
You wouldn't care

It's just a pencil

My mind of darkness, my mind of sin
It's just a pencil
This thought might just send me straight to hell
What then?

Angels tear drops on my cheek
Like the rain in the street

Daemons tell me I don't deserve you
I don't deserve you
Where do I get the nerve to
Believe that I
Deserve you.


"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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1 posted 2009-09-17 02:15 PM


technically you're still a teenager.. cos eight TEEN lol i liked this poem.... it left a lot of thought... although im not sure i understand the reference to the pencil... thank you for sharing
Krysti

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2 posted 2009-10-04 05:36 PM


yeah... what's with the pencil?
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