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0 posted 2009-08-25 11:29 AM


Okay so the title sucks. Probably because its early and I just finished breakfast. I might rewrite this poem later. Anyway, enjoy.

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I slip into the blackness
And dream me another tale
Of my thoughts inside my head
Where purity prevails  

I'll travel to space
hanging on with all might
The red and blue rockets
Will sore into flight

Stars will mimic fireflies
Dancing around me so
The moon hanging on strings
And the earth spinning below

The stars give me kisses
As I balance on a spoon in milkyway
I catch a comet and go for a ride
Flying into the abyss far away

I sit there wondering
My thoughts falling into a swirl
Dreams make more sense to me
Then what lies outside this world

I can feel daylight creeping
Until another time dream land
I'll wait until night fall
To dream of you again


© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-09-04 07:01 AM


Wow. Just wow. Amazing work. This poem....it's beyond beauty. I like all your poems but this one... Wow.

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2 posted 2009-09-10 08:27 PM


oh Zach honey i always enjoy your poems.. amazing!!
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