Teen Poetry #9 |
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Brownies in the Rain |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland ![]() |
Sorry about the title, I thought it would catch a certain persons attention. _________ I'm sorry if I hurt you, I never meant to fall. But now that I'm at the bottom, I'll catch you if I need to. I know you feel alone, but honestly, look around. I'm still with you, I always will be here. Don't cry tonight, I'm just as scared as you. I still want to be your friend, I'm still here no matter what. Trust me, I never thought little of you, you could always make me smile. {~~*~~} __________________________ I don't know if the person this is meant for will read it, or catch on. But if you do, I really am sorry for anything I did wrong. I miss being your friend. Lacrimosa Dies Illa |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I kind of liked the title. Hope the poem worked and you are friends again. A |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I like this. But may I ask. For who is this for? Curious. -Zach |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I wrote it for you, a while ago. {~~*~~} Lacrimosa Dies Illa [Oh that tearful day] {~~*~~} [This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (09-02-2009 12:07 AM).] |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I sure hope you guys are friends again - and if you are, I'll just eat the brownies in the rain (if ya'll don't mind and all). xoxoxo Alison |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Haha. Julianna thought it was for me. I was skeptical. :P -Zach |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Beautifully captured. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
thats because i'm the smart one there, zach ![]() lovely poem em, its the nicest thing ![]() julianna |
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