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Always there.
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Always there. |
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Astrophial New Member
since 2009-08-10
Posts 6 |
Its always been there. Tugging. Pulling. Prodding. It has my attention now. I hoped this wouldn't happen. I hoped I could trust you. I hoped we wouldn't fall apart. My hoping my futile. Its all gone now. You say those words. There's no reason for me anymore. This probably makes no sense, but that's alright. Comments welcome, don't be afraid to be harsh. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
You have a good way with words, I disagree though, I think it makes sense. What you've described is an experience in life that, regrettably, you have to experience at one time or another. Keep up the writing Rileigh |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
short and sweet. very nice |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Maybe it's just me, but I disagree with both statments you said. I don't think it's especially short, I've seen shorter, and the tone I got from it wasn't "sweet." I think the length and the tone were both excellent, but not "short and sweet." I agree with the "very nice" part though.  |
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