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Opened the tap |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
On a wall of talent. In a river of genius. A endless flow. Just so you know, it's like watching a show, full of people better then me far as I can see, better to be the one standing on the outside. Inside. I died. No one cried, no one sighed. Follow the road, endless flow. Society laws we abide, cross the line the law you collide. Don't touch. 4:38 in the mornin' can't sleep, got a plane to catch at 3. New fam. New Plan. Mess it up again, repeat the sin. Again and again. I promised I wouldn't, know that I shouldn't. Guess it's just me. If someones gotta judge, let it be thee. Broken heart? Got that. Give me a stage and I'll show you where the suns at. Disrespect me? I'll show you where the guns at. Figuratively and emotionally, secretively I hope for my own failure. Pretend that I can do so much better. Hold my hand and we'll walk. Guide you through the bush and we'll talk. Stare into mine, I'll stare unto yours. For the abyss may be full of fire, the soul burning of desire. For the abyss may hold my breath, wish the death of what we birth. The angles may smile, the daemons may smirk. The angles may cry, the daemons may lurk. Let 'em whisper in my ear, let 'em fill you full of fear. I'll always look to the heavens in disparate vain. Let the light soak through my heart of black stain. Yet I dance with the devil, fight with the daemons. My home is in the abyss, on the layer of the fifth. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Another one of your poems! I think you are a really good author. I'm guessing that it makes more sense to you than it does to anyone else, i think that's just how poetry is. Nice work! |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
you've got great talent... wonderful thoughts library! |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Your rhymes remind me of those by Tablo from Epik High, a great rapper, and (in my opinion) one of the best writers I've ever seen. Great job! There is power in the pen. |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Got me some time to read and came back for a second helping... You just wow me with this one!! Such flow... Such words!! I'm jealous now!! |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Got meself some time So came back for a second helping... Such flow... Such words!! Ah! I'm truly jealous!! |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you! You're too kind  |
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