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Remember Me? |
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arabesque Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 14USA |
Through the hailing haze Through the tragic end You always kept me sane You always acted like a friend Our line was always definite We were so positively sure But something seemed to happen Because the line began to blur We used to be best friends The kind that shared everything Sleepovers, parties, adventures, Secrets, nicknames, and a ring Then you moved away Both of us in tears We called each other mostly Sharing our new found fears Then I found new friends And you found a whole clique We began to forget How much we used to speak I became the serious one And you turned into a "prep" We began to waver And that was the first step We never got into a fight And I’m very proud of that But what’s the point When our friendship is so flat? I want to pick up the phone And always hear your voice Telling me exciting gossip Or a reason to rejoice But I know that this is the end We’ll never be the same Though, I can’t help but wonder If I see you, will you even know my name? Forever, |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
The callings of a heart are only repeated by the eyes and the tears of your soul. Beautifully captured. -LostPoet |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Welcome to Pip!!! I thought this was wonderful, I really liked it, and I can't wait to read more of your work. The hardest part about writing poetry, is trying not to write like everyone else. |
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arabesque Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 14USA |
Thank you both for reading!  Forever, |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
This is really good and so true The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
its such a sad but common scenerio i hope that you and you're friend are somehow reunited loved the poem x |
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