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priyanka
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0 posted 2009-06-15 11:46 AM


Dreams
The times in our heart
where things will remain the same,
we'll unravel our feelings and
distance will complete the change.
Abrupt is the beginning, abrupt is the end,
but let us hope to meet where time will never end
Where there is nothing beyond life, just nothing like death.
We will be immortal and then things will just begin.
A whole new world with beautiful minds,
where we'll stay together and live forever.
Where dreams will be complete and be fullfilled,
there will be nothing much left but never will time be still.
Where life will be mad eand where thoughts come true-
that is my world where dreams come true.
Beyond the perception of human mind,
beyond the thoughts we can ever find.
That is my world where no is blind,
where you can ask and find.
That is my world where we live life anew
That is my world where dreams come true...

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1 posted 2009-06-15 12:45 PM


Welcome to PiP, nice opening poem.
priyanka
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2 posted 2009-06-16 12:05 PM


thank you
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3 posted 2009-06-16 06:58 PM


Enjoyed this very much. Welcome to Passions!

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4 posted 2009-09-27 06:57 PM


OMG it was soooooo pretty!!!! The way you described it..... it just had the sense of making me feel calm.... beautiful! absolutley wonderful!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

priyanka
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5 posted 2009-10-04 04:55 PM


thank you kai...
you are lovely too...
the idea you came up with for falling rain's 3rd stanza is too good...
really hope you take part in contests
you've got really good talent...

hafrock
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6 posted 2020-08-17 09:19 AM


After long read your first post. Way too good.
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