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Teen Poetry #9

From the Watery World

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2009-06-09 09:37 AM

From the Watery World

I missed you, you know
In the dark of the night
When I wake up from nightmares
That leave my sweat cold

I imagine your arms
So strong and secure
Wrapped around my body
-For a moment, I'm safe

I look to the northwest
Where I know you are
Thinking of me as I'm thinking of you
Watching and waiting the same as I do

The pain is been lessened
As I look at your face
So full of your love
In my tattered used wallet

I miss you, you know
As I sit here alone
Watching the sun color
My watery world

"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-06-09 12:11 PM

Awww! This was soo sweet! I love it.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2009-06-18 06:59 PM

I like this!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

3 posted 2009-06-27 12:41 PM

I love it! It's sweet, gentle and, heartwarming. Great write!=^.^=
~UNTAMEDelegance

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2009-06-28 09:23 PM

Awww Kate!! This was awesome!
Miss you, love you!!!

To fly is to fall and miss the sidewalk
-Douglas Adams

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

5 posted 2009-07-09 09:23 PM

well. you certainly have captured my attention as per usual.  great work,
         expecting more soon,
                                              CO

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

6 posted 2009-07-15 11:56 PM

This is such a good poem

The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made.

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