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Teen Poetry #9

Lose to Win

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

0 posted 2009-06-06 10:54 PM

passions kindled inside out
empty kisses invite doubt
lose to win, the game is on
tangled sheets and legs till dawn
touch makes love, makes war inside
exposed to gain control in lies
flesh to flesh craves shallow lust
shadows in her eyes scream lust
a victim snared by apathy
the gavel falls, no sympathy
"friends" cast judgment, lips accuse
just keep in mind, it could be you.

[This message has been edited by kindredspirit (06-08-2009 04:14 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-06-08 02:29 PM

This was pretty good. I like it.

I really liked the beginning few lines. Keep up the good work.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

2 posted 2009-06-08 04:14 PM

Falling Rain, Thankyou!

I will do my best.

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

3 posted 2009-06-09 11:48 PM

i miswrote this.

edit:
"flesh to flesh craves shallow trust"

thankyou.
lol

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

4 posted 2009-07-01 09:08 AM

I love it!

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