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nehematala
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0 posted 2009-05-29 02:51 PM


The tearing of pages
Puts a bratching* in my heart
Ripped away,
A life that ended to soon
Not having a chance to make friends
Or even at life
The two year old that
Struggles to live and give
And grace the world with her shinning smile
And give light to a deep dark night
Is fighting for her life and all we can do is watch
With tears in our eyes and hope in our heart
We say a worried prayer and open our eyes
To find her gone
She fought her hardest but she just couldn't fight death
Dressed in her christmas dress that she never wore
At a funeral home in a little coffin where her body will remain forever
While her soul lives on in heaven for the rest of eternity
She will remain two
Never getting a chance at life.


*bratching an unwelcome feeling that hurts so bad its undiscribable (not a real word)

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

[This message has been edited by nehematala (05-29-2009 05:57 PM).]

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1 posted 2009-05-30 10:48 AM


Aww. This is a tragic poem. If this really happened then I'm sorry for your loss. Heart-touching poem.

-Zach  

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

nehematala
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2 posted 2009-05-30 01:59 PM


It is my niece was killed when she was two

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

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