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Rosie_Orange
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since 2009-04-20
Posts 46
South Africa

0 posted 2009-05-21 02:02 PM



My best friend is overweight and every day the boys in my class bully her, tell her she is useless or completely ignore her. This is for her and HersheyKiss and anyone who had been bullied for being different.
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Glasses,
large red nerd specs perch on my nose.
they take up my entire face.
My face clear of pimples,
my body safe from cellulite.

You look like an owl,
they tease for a week.
I ignore their taunts,
I didn’t choose giant frames
for nothing.

a friend since toddler years,
is overweight.
they never notice her big brown eyes,
or her perfect golden hair.

i give her one week free from their words
that cut her like a thousand knives.
she is never accepted,
her jokes never laughed at.

a class of fifteen evil boys,
torture her every day,
for bad genes.

i sit and watch tears well in her eyes,
i stifle their giggles with glares,
and yet they continue
to torment my oldest friend.

Love, Peace, Chocolate *mmmmmm*

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Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
1 posted 2009-05-23 10:11 AM


I know how that's like.. Me and my friends are outcasts too. And the insults do end up getting to me. But those boys words don't mean anything because she has you. You are there for her. Who actually care for her. Your words are the only one she should care about. Those boys don't know much about her, only enough to pick on her, right?

Just some thoughts.

I hope you and your friend are pushing through. Best wishes.

-Zach

P.S. Good poem by the way.   

I love my crayons. :D lol

nehematala
Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129

2 posted 2009-05-24 06:50 PM


This poem is so good. I know what it feels like to be tormented like that. I have been an out cast since kindergarten.
kindredspirit
Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156

3 posted 2009-06-08 04:34 PM


i know exactly how that feels, and it's really hard. you are definitely an amazing friend to her, and i wish you two the best.


XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
4 posted 2011-01-05 10:22 PM


I suppose torment creates poets because bullies never seem to write any decent poetry.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

*tori_rose*
Junior Member
since 2010-10-12
Posts 44
Weber City, VA
5 posted 2011-01-14 11:29 PM


this is a very good poem, i like it alot.

~*tori*~

~XxMz.NerdyRockstarxX~
Junior Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 15
Alabama, United States
6 posted 2011-01-20 04:24 AM


I KNOW EXCATLY HOW THAT FEELS ME AND MY BESTFRIEND ARE THE SAME WHY IM THE NERDY BIG GIRL AND SHE'S THE NERD WITH GLASSES AND CANCER PEOPLE ARE GOING TO TALK ITS WHAT THEY BEST THE TRICK IS TO IGNORE THEM HAVE FUN BY YOURSELVES REMEMEBER THOSE WHO MIND DONT MATTER TELL YOUR FRIEND TO HOLD HER HEAD HIGH SHE'S BEAUTIFUL NO MATTER WHAT SHE LOOKS LIKE EVEN I THINK BIG IS BEAUTIFUL AND GLASSES ARE SEXY LOL BUT YOU TO HAVE EACH OTHER AND THATS ALL YOU NEED........GREAT POEM MY BESTFRIEND IS GOING TO LOVE THIS BECAUSE IM SO SENDING IT TO HER LOL GREAT JOB

~XxExpect Nothing N You'll Never Get HurtxX~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2011-01-20 11:49 AM


You have a large heart. Welcome to Passions!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

grandmasgirl
Junior Member
since 2011-06-08
Posts 12

8 posted 2011-07-05 01:30 AM


thanks for writing this it ment alot cuz i am that fat girl

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