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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31
Terrell,Texas

0 posted 2009-05-14 09:28 PM


This is dedicated to my great-grandmother.R.I.P


When someone you love,
Suddenly dies,
Everyone hurts,
And everyone cries.

It helps to talk,
To your Mom or Dad,
About the person,
And the life they had.

Sometimes it's better,
Things happen that way,
For those who are sick,
And in pain every day.

It's not your fault,
If someone is dead,
Don't let that thought,
Enter your head.

Death is sad,
For our parents,too,
It doesn't seem fair,
And hurts through and through.

It can make you angry,
It can make you reel,
But the more time passes,
The better you'll feel.

When you think of that person,
Say a little prayer,
And know that the memory,
Will always be there.

  Granny I miss u,please wait for me at Heaven's door.

We are unique in Jesus' eyes.

© Copyright 2009 Sacha Aurora Henderson - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2009-05-15 03:56 AM


Love the message!!!

The poem flowed nicely, too!

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31
Terrell,Texas
2 posted 2009-05-18 08:25 PM


Thank you Christine
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