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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2009-05-12 03:03 PM


I don't really know if this belongs in teen, lol, but I put it here anyways.
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Mary had a little lamb,
who's eyes black as night.
And everywhere that lamb went,
fear arose from the streets.

This little lamb didn't want
to be so scary.
But there was nothing he could do
to stop what people thought.

All day and all night,
this little lamb prayed.
He prayed hard to become beautiful,
so that everyone would love him.

Mary had a little lamb,
who only wanted to be loved.
Too bad that day never came,
now he's here watching you.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

© Copyright 2009 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
Kalysta
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since 2009-04-02
Posts 41
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1 posted 2009-05-13 11:42 PM


Wow...Really good poem. Kinda dark but really good. 2 thumbs up!
    ~Kalysta~

~Kalysta~

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2 posted 2009-05-14 07:51 AM


I really like this. I never thought of rewriting a nursery rhyme. Good idea.

-Zach

I love my crayons. :D lol

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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3 posted 2009-05-14 02:03 PM


haha, thanks zach and kalysta! i'm glad you liked it

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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