Teen Poetry #9 |
Mary Had A Little Lamb |
Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
I don't really know if this belongs in teen, lol, but I put it here anyways. ___________________________________________________________ Mary had a little lamb, who's eyes black as night. And everywhere that lamb went, fear arose from the streets. This little lamb didn't want to be so scary. But there was nothing he could do to stop what people thought. All day and all night, this little lamb prayed. He prayed hard to become beautiful, so that everyone would love him. Mary had a little lamb, who only wanted to be loved. Too bad that day never came, now he's here watching you. julianna |
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Kalysta Junior Member
since 2009-04-02
Posts 41Ohio |
Wow...Really good poem. Kinda dark but really good. 2 thumbs up! ~Kalysta~ ~Kalysta~ |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I really like this. I never thought of rewriting a nursery rhyme. Good idea. -Zach I love my crayons. :D lol |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
haha, thanks zach and kalysta! i'm glad you liked it julianna |
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