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Me Against The Crowd
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Me Against The Crowd |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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 What are the slight chances To try again and roll the dice? Play ever card I hold in my hand To risk it all for a price How many times do I have to try To climb all the way to the top? Forever scaling that social latter 'Till I find a reason to stop Always finding myself wondering Why am I at the bottom of this chain? Is it because I don't have the cash? What is it that I have to obtain? Do I not have a magical spark? To match the flashy clothes they wear Simple middle class wealth I hold All my flaws exposed leaving me bare Suburban houses is all I've seen High dreams too simple to the rich How I wish at night for something more But lives just can't be switched |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
zach this is really good. i can't believe no one's posted anything. i love it, the flow of it was really well and it was easy to read. great job  library. ?ul!@nn@ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
well i was gunna say something along the lines of what Julianna said but im like, nah, that's lame to have to read two comments that say the same thing. So then i thought of this shirt i have that has this awesome quote on it. It says summin' like.. "To the world you may be one person, But to one person you may be the world" Great write, {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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Kalysta Junior Member
since 2009-04-02
Posts 41Ohio |
Hey I really liked this. I'm new at the whole wrighting poems thing, but I can tell a good poem when I see one, and yours was amazing! Awesome write!! ~Kalysta~ ~Kalysta~ |
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