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Teen Poetry #9

Through the Looking Glass

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-03-22 07:57 PM

Do I like what I see?
Am I healthy?
Do i look pretty in this Dress?
Do I believe in myself?
Do I love myself?

Yes, I do

Through the looking glass
I see what it truly means to
be a human of God.
I never back down,
I stand up

Lana
XOXOXOX

Human

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-03-23 08:23 AM

Wow this poem gave me a little bit of strength to keep hold'n on. I like this.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

2 posted 2009-03-23 11:26 AM

T'was the point

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2009-03-23 06:30 PM

I like the "point" of this poem, it made me think.

Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved.

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

4 posted 2009-03-26 07:27 PM

thnx

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