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Teen Poetry #9

Eternal

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-03-21 01:21 AM

There's this aching pain inside,
at the bottom of my heart.
I can't seem to rid of it,
no matter how I start.
Every tear turns to rain,
people learn to lie.
But as I grow weaker,
I'll look towards the sky.
The stars will remind me,
just how much they care.
So if you ever feel lonely,
just look there.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-03-22 06:52 PM

I like the contrast of despair and hope here Emily.

It's been a long time since I spoke to you, I hope that you're ok.

Out of reach, out of sight
I feel strange and lost
Can you lead me right?
It's too dark for me to see,
capture of soul won't you please forgive me

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

2 posted 2009-03-22 07:52 PM

keep on trying

Ethernaut
Junior Member

since 2009-04-07

Posts 31
NT, Australia

3 posted 2009-04-09 02:47 AM

So true. This reminds me of the many starlit nights I have spent gazing upwards. In my case it can only be improved by a full moon and perhaps a hint of lightning from a coming storm.
Last night was one such and the storm continued on and off for 4 hours. Dancing in drenching torrential rain is an exquisite joy.
If you ever come to the tropics, try it. It washes away all the pain, frees the soul.

jeffturner
New Member

since 2009-04-13

Posts 1

4 posted 2009-04-13 08:10 AM

Wow nice poem, good to see this

Kamagra Penegra

Love_Skull
Junior Member

since 2008-07-15

Posts 44

5 posted 2009-04-13 08:37 PM

love the poem!
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