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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Thanks Prettypinkrebel, for helping me with the ending. I’m not about to cry So tears stay inside Just let yourself deny That you could love that guy I’m not about scream So anger hold your tongue Just let yourself believe That you were always wrong I’m not about to forget So memories please thrive Hold on to your regrets As long as you’re alive I’m not about to lose So habits you can't win Finally, I will choose To live and love, again Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved. [This message has been edited by freeand2sexy (03-20-2009 05:58 PM).] |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I'm burning your flag..? No longer shall you nag..? I'll stuff you in a bag..? I'm raising my flag..? You'll be wiped away with a rag..? Your weight I won't drag..? Your reign will gag..? Old habits, start to lag..?  HAHA!!! Sorry, I had fun with that...hehehehe... |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
How about Im not about to lose This haabit cannot win Finally I will choose to love again |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Ha! Maybe you should go with pretty pink rebel's... |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I like yours, Prettypinkrebel, I just want to change it a lil bit. Thank you Thank you Michaela, for your ideas too, I liked reading them, I'm glad you had fun with it. Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
HaHa!! No prob...heheh... |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
AH! I love this! What a brilliant write! Library for sure. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
In contrast Christine, this is awful imo - and I'll tell you why if you want. But you ought to know. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Nah, you can save it for an other poem, I wrote this basically because I was bored, and half asleep if you look at the time I posted it which is 3 hours ahead from Cali, so I wasn't even focused on anything that would make it good, except the rhyme. If I were you I would save it for a poem that matters, but if you're dieing to tell me why, then who am I to stop you. Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved. |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Lol it's ok Christine I'm not dying to tell you, mainly because it'll mean reading it again  . I'll save it for when you do it again then ...pounce  |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
lol If I do it again, you mean. Wait what am I thinking, of course I'm going to do it again. Now I'm kinda scared. Eh, oh well. Jesus loves you! Don't believe it? Then at least believe that I love you! I may not know you, but you're a person too, and you deserve to be loved. |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
your welcome |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Ahhh!! I simply love this to like no end! Its just simply amazing. I love it! And you say that Michaela and I are good at writing. Look at who taught us! (Library)-Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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