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Teen Poetry #9

I Love You

angel1326
New Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 4
WV, United States

0 posted 2009-03-11 09:00 PM

Baby I love you from the bottom of my heart.
You know the right words to say to me.
You know how to hold me and kiss me.
You know I love your smiles.
You know I'm scared to lose you and I miss you when your gone.
I love all of the kisses I get and the hugs too.
Baby no one could ever love you the way I do.

Sick of crying, tired of trying, yeah im smiling but inside im dying...
I am the girl who is too sad to give a fuck...

kiwie15:D
Junior Member

since 2009-03-05

Posts 13
california

1 posted 2009-03-11 10:56 PM

personally i really like this poem...i understand it..and i like how you put feeling into it...<3i really like the last part...no one loves you like i do...must be a very special person....want to here more

always
kiwie

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-03-13 01:02 PM

Awwe. Nice write.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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