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pandabear
Junior Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 36


0 posted 2009-03-09 11:39 PM



What do I want?
........................
I want to run
I want to hide
I want to go away from you
Yes, you the one who makes me wish I was gone, run and even hide
You tell me things that are not true
Like
Your a failure in life
You need to live your life the way I want you too
Not the way you want to
Only because your a teenager
You don't know what you want
You don't know who you really are
I do
I know what you need
I know who you really are
But, you have to do as I say
Even if it makes you cry
Or even make you feel like you want to runaway
I know you wont 'cuz your too scared
To scared to cry
Even to scared to even runaway


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GothicCherry
Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
1 posted 2009-03-10 10:10 AM


I liked the way this began in one persons point of view and then switched to another, but it can also be quite confusing.

Enjoyed...

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