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Belinda
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0 posted 2009-03-06 11:02 PM



it pours from me,
not red but blue,
not what is expected?
don't aim to please you

you don't understand me,
so please don't pretend,
i would rather die again,
than see our end

i want you
a passionate yearn,
i hate you
soon i'll learn

mixed up
just lost
you're right,
at any cost

drunk and honest
sober thoughts
mind still rational,
crossees or noughts?

love me
please
don't tease.

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

© Copyright 2009 Belinda Black - All Rights Reserved
GothicCherry
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1 posted 2009-03-07 10:08 AM


Interesting but over all I like it
Belinda
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since 2006-01-30
Posts 126
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2 posted 2009-03-09 01:43 PM


a little abstract haha
i'm not sure exactly what it means, but it made sense there and then

thanks
Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

GothicCherry
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3 posted 2009-03-20 08:40 AM


Lol...Most of my poems don't make sense after going back to read them so I see where you are coming from
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