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Reluctant Repose
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Reluctant Repose |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Reluctant Repose My eyes flutter as I undress the ceiling, searching for come cold seeping through its skin, but she shies away from my awkward gaze. The room rolls from side to side, pitched to and fro, left then right, right then left. All care is being taken to leave my mind blank. If only I could leave my mind then I might sleep. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alex~ 'If only I could leave my mind then I might sleep.' Oh Alex ... I DO know this ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks for reading. |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
I've probably said this before, but I'll gladly say it again. I always enjoy reading your poems. It's like sifting through a sandbox for a lost toy. :] There is power in the pen. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
Why thank you. I do love to cover the treasure in sand every now and again.  |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Amazing! I truly love reading your poetry! With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Oh! I love your word choice... |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i always love reading your poems so beautiful i'm lost and going nowhere |
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