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Teen Poetry #9

Finally

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

0 posted 2009-02-13 10:20 AM

The Tension has ended, The Question waas answered.
Quickly and unexpected as he said the words.
I love you to her.
She only wanted to smile again for he was the one her smile was for
She finally got what she wanted could this be happening to her?
She's now laying worried o the floor
Her heart open to hm agian will it break or will it mend?? Only time will tell.....Finally!!

**~~ this isnt my best it's a vent! But I hope you like ~~**

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-02-13 09:10 PM

oh! I do like this poem! Even though it was a vent it's still good.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-02-15 10:49 AM

I like it too. Vents make for nice short works. Glad I read this one.

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