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Teen Poetry #9
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Vulpine
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 20
Minnesota
0 posted 2012-06-21 10:50 PM


Sadness
Its taste is bitter
Its touch is cold
It’s like death coming over
An old weak body
But its smell is of the sweetest kind
Like that of honey
Oh my sweet sorrow that is sadness


I just want you to believe in me when no one else does.
© Copyright 2012 Emi B. Opheim - All Rights Reserved
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
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1 posted 2014-01-16 10:44 PM

Your poetry brings out something profound.

While many of us are familiar with "sweet sorrow", few relate the same to sadness.

Very good, thought provoking read.

...just bein' Bluesy
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