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Teen Poetry #9
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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2012-05-17 12:12 PM

the solid double lines between us go on farther than the eye can see. the areas where the lines break up were painted over when you pushed me away to the other side and decided to start believing lies. the words that bled from your lips burned my whole being, and with every word you spoke another line was painted yellow.

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell
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priyanka
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india
1 posted 2012-06-08 02:53 AM

B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2014-01-06 09:01 AM

Excellent use of metaphor
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