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Teen Poetry #9
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grandmasgirl
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since 2011-06-08
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0 posted 2012-02-11 01:05 AM



Hello
I need you
Hello
I fell really blue
Hello
Mom Are you There
Hello
Dad do you Care
Hello
i said so many times
Hello
Do you only hear me sometimes
Hello
Maybe i sould say goodbye

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oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA
1 posted 2012-02-28 11:13 AM


Fun poem, serious sentiment.  Sometimes you gotta hit the donkey on the head before it starts to pay attention.

Best, Jimbeaux)

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