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| Teen Poetry #9 |
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dear love |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
dear love,look at me can u see, this pain's driving me crazy people say u make the world go round but i say today u let me down.. dear love, u said there's nothing u can't do for as long as i am true now look at me do u see the girl i used to be? tell me what u find if u can read my mind look in my eyes do u see a million lies? dear love, u said i could give him my heart u promised we'll never be apart i ignored what's in my head i did everything he said now i lay in the green grass i cry as i watch the birds pass i see the butterflies fly away i watch the sky as it turns gray dear love, i hope u know how i feel so low i hope u can see what u did to me........ " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
I like the idea behind the poem, writing to love! That is really good. But dear Karren, there are good days and there are bad days, the beauty lies in the fact that you can edit your memories to remember the best days  |
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