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Teen Poetry #9

the Knights

LilMissHickey
Junior Member

since 2011-09-09

Posts 12
Usa

0 posted 2011-09-09 11:17 PM

Here is a tale,
of a girl,
that has a wee problem,
she is in love with two fine handsome knights,
One is star gazed,
and fights to keep her on her feet,
and the other,
well he sweeps her off her feet,
while riding on his white horse,
who to choose?
One might say of course the knight on the horse,
But one thing many do not relize is the backround to the story of the knight who has been fighting,
you see the knight after being with her for many years,
has fallen ill,
and they dont know how much longer,
so she has chosen him,
untill she's with the other knight,
and everything seems to be so right,
the smell,
the surrounding,
everything,
she thinks oh how to change,
But she cannot hurt the other side,
so what shall she do?
if only someone knew...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-09-10 09:01 AM

Welcome to Pip, dear Cycrena!

This is quite the dilemma and you rendered it so beautifully!

The heart will know the answer!

Love,
Margherita

LilMissHickey
Junior Member

since 2011-09-09

Posts 12
Usa

2 posted 2011-09-13 06:04 PM

Thanks! (:

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

3 posted 2011-10-03 08:29 PM

If only one knew! but yes someday you will know! well put

LilMissHickey
Junior Member

since 2011-09-09

Posts 12
Usa

4 posted 2011-10-04 01:28 PM

Thank you.

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