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madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2011-03-24 04:36 PM

You made me smile
Whenever I saw you
You made me smile
Whenever you laughed
You made me smile
Whenever you were around

You made me laugh
When you told a joke
You made me laugh
When I was upset
You made me laugh
When I needed it

You made me frown
When someone teased you
You made me frown
When you started talking about it
You made me frown
When you experimented

You made me angry
When you tried drugs
You made me angry
When you started to drive
You made me angry
When I blamed myself

You made me cry
When you drove away
You made me cry
When you said goodbye
You made me cry
When I was at your funeral

You made me smile
When you were alive
You made me laugh
When you were alive
You made me frown
When you first tried it
You made me angry
When you didn’t go for help
You made me cry
When you crashed into the tree
You made me cry
At your funeral
You made me angry
With myself for letting you go
You made me frown
When I saw your parents
You made me stop laughing
You made me stop smiling
Because of your stupid mistake
With
Drugs

Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-03-24 10:28 PM

Madelyn, from my heart I hope this isn't based on a true situation. And if it is, I thank you for sharing it's impact in this writing so we all may share your burden and learn its lesson through your hurt. And, well written, as always.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

2 posted 2011-03-25 02:42 AM

Wow madelyn. That is truly wonderful. It is so haunting.

HolsJoscelyne
Junior Member

since 2011-04-05

Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom

3 posted 2011-04-08 04:46 PM

Wow, as the first commenter said.
I really hope this wasn't true.
But so much emotion!
Honestly Madelyn you're so truly amazing at writing!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

AmyLynn
New Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 4
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2011-06-25 05:08 PM

Oh my, I wish we could talk. email me. My sister died 4 years ago. I lend my prayers to you...

*tori_rose*
Junior Member

since 2010-10-12

Posts 44
Weber City, VA

5 posted 2011-07-06 10:08 PM

As two others have said i so hope this is not from something you have had to wittness. im so sorry if it was though thank you for sharing that, it is very well written. i can feel the pain that comes from within.

~*tori*~

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

6 posted 2011-10-04 07:35 PM

this is really sad,, really i hope this isnt true... uve got a lot of talent.. keep writing..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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