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lumina New Member
since 2011-03-21
Posts 7california |
every heart a heart to break, every mind a mind to make, change. change. change. the nurses ambition, to convert, and cover until beyond recognition the fear of a million in the woman’s step, the uncertainty of so many in her look nurses hand guides the knife sure as an artist with a brush, and now finished with the procedure, when she steps out i stare in fright who is this woman who went in will she ever come out? my mother has a new plastic face, lifted eyes, and tummy tucked, i look at myself, when i am grown will i be pretty? will a nurse shape my body? will my lips be bigger? my face be rounder? my skin be perfect? will i be pretty? and then what? only regret |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
Really touching poem. I enjoyed it. It's a really good first post. Welcome to Pip  M Sadness, like happiness, has its own majestic beauty and must be embraced as a valid emotion, not pushed down as an abnormality. |
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lumina New Member
since 2011-03-21
Posts 7california |
thank you! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is absolutely fantastic. A talented display of poetry here. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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