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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2011-03-11 06:18 PM


the world which is so
astonishing and
intimidating
sometimes we get fooled
by its beauty and
nature, the deep blue
ocean sparkling with
the bright orange sun
the different kind
of leaves getting blown
by the wind, so many
kinds of species of
birds and animals
on this planet, the
vast sky with white clouds
in different shapes
and sizes the world
which is unique in
its own way and we
admire it but its
not that perfect this
world is ugly in
its own way, the wars
that go on forever
criminals that are
on the block killing
innocent people
taking there money
stealing and lying
people creating
more pollution just
by smoking people
throwing trash while
driving don't they know
it affects the plants
and animals on this
planet how did this
world become so ugly
can't we have peace and
harmony why do
we get fooled by its
beauty and not see
the reality
why are us humans
so blind and not see
what's going on in
this ugly yet beautiful world

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-03-22 09:20 PM


Truly.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

LilMissHickey
Junior Member
since 2011-09-09
Posts 12
Usa
2 posted 2011-09-09 11:23 PM


Ahamazing!
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
3 posted 2011-09-10 12:06 PM


thank you
LilMissHickey
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since 2011-09-09
Posts 12
Usa
4 posted 2011-09-13 06:17 PM


Really good

LilMissHickey<3

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
5 posted 2011-09-13 06:31 PM


thank you you should chk out my poems in the dark poetry i would like to see some of yours
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
6 posted 2011-10-03 08:25 PM


nice! liked it
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
7 posted 2011-10-03 08:31 PM


thank you
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