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Waiting Wanting Willing Wishing
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Waiting Wanting Willing Wishing |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Waiting Wanting Willing Wishing Waiting takes up all my life Wanting, willing, wishing But nothing changes, and I suspect it won’t Sweet life of sunshine carries me through Giving breath to my suffocated soul While the honey smell of spring enthralls me No more frozen twilights, no more bitter morning air It vanished with the coming of the Light All happiness complete, but one, just one How long will you subject me? How long shall I ponder and wonder unknowing? Ask me this instant; keep me as your own Every moment we are together Anew heartbreak, a new desire I’m ready, let’s begin our new adventure On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i liked it  |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Dear Kate, This makes me smile. Congratulations - Earl |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Awesome! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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rachel_anubis Junior Member
since 2011-03-24
Posts 43 |
That was really beautiful. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
LOVE!!!!!! Man ur such an amazing writer.. i wish i had your talent.. these days i can barely manage a whole sentence, let alone a poem.. xx |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Just a piece of irony, I wrote this the day before he proposed. On the black coated walls, they wrote my doom. |
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