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Teen Poetry #9
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animecrazy71
Junior Member
since 2010-10-01
Posts 16
Pakistan
0 posted 2010-12-27 01:30 PM

I want that fire
Inside of me,
To end this desire
and break me free
of these shackles
which bind me
in a trammel
of worldly lust,

I want the flare
to end this avidity
Eating the insides of me,
This I can no more bare,
So God induce in me
the passion, strength and dare,
So that I may break free
of this Materialistic affair.

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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2010-12-31 11:08 PM

I like the strength and passion in this.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
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