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my first love
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my first love |
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khadidja Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16 |
he told him things that I never told he calls me names that I have never been called I love things that I never loved I have things that I never had I wrote poems that I never wrote I said things that I never said I find things that I never found I'm doing things that I never thought I could near to him my heart beating like it never been sound I'm hearing songs that I never heard they seem all the same it sing only his name it bring only the pain a lot of clouds and rain the person that I could change for him DOESN'T LOVE ME what should I do ..what should I say I'm so lost in this way my heart is down on it knees but this is how the way it is can't change it I love him and don't ask me why the pain in my heart is so high the way he looks the way he walks the way he say my name the fact that he can't see me drive me insane I know this is too much to ask but this is all I've got I'm not pretty , always bored so invisible , living in my own world I cry easily I look horribly I'm too nice , no matter what it takes always by your side I don't know if that's good or bad but this is all I have ********************************************* I didn't finish it plz give me ur comments thank u |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
The sincerity and the emotions are very moving. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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khadidja Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16 |
thank u my friend |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You need to finish this, on the upswing of all that is YOU... and if all of this has created within you the need/want/desire to write? Then it was all worthy...so I will look for more from you. Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
it'so honest |
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khadidja Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16 |
thank u guys I really aperciate it and a special thanks for sunshine for the greeting card and your care thank u very much again I'll do my best  |
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khadidja Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16 |
back.. .. I'm lazy I watch too much television chat for hours without a reason wating for u to show up cuz when I talk to u I light up thinking all the time and even stay up smiling to the comuter like a fool I don't care as long Im with you what is exosting that I never mean to I never mean to love u this feeling kills me tear me apart to know this is all I've got I see nothing at the mirore when u cant see me I can't hear my self when u can't hear me I saw nightmares when I dont see u in my dreams u have NO idea how it feels negleged, fergotten,alone.. feeling like this is the life that u own hidden, sceard , fear facing everything alone with a facke smile and a lot of tears but what an incradble friends I have they do everything to not to make u feel that bad but this feeling kills me ..tear me apart so confused..I don't know a lot I should stop writing and revising but I have NO strengh to keep going I'm tierd ..tierd ..of failing and dissappointing tierd of keep trying and trying tierd of beeing tierd tierd if beeing silent I want to speak I want to scream but no one listenn no one care I have no one that I can share this terrible feelings I have this is what life bring I'm so confused ..I dont know a thing **************************************** dont forget the comment thank u |
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Starcitta Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18WY, USA |
that was amazing, even if its a long poem, it flows throughout, you truly expressed your feelings. And i respect that, well done Amor Y Lagrimas |
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khadidja Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16 |
thx thx my friend I know its long ..I'll try to make it shorter and better thank u for ur comment ..I aperciate it |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is powerful. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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khadidja Junior Member
since 2010-12-03
Posts 16 |
thank u my friend |
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