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Our love
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Our love |
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Chavo.wavo Junior Member
since 2010-11-13
Posts 15 |
My love... if only you knew what it meant... My love burns in my heart with a fire so hot, only your love will quench it. My love explodes out of me like a bomb... and flows right into you. My love and your love will intertwine, and create not two hearts, but one. My love and your love will be a bond no one can break. My love will soon become... Our love... |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This is romantic and full of wonderful sentiments, though I'm not sure it's the best you can do, after reading one or three of your others. I think you are capable of far better poetry than this, and I look forward to reading it as you produce it. Thanks! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Starcitta Junior Member
since 2011-01-21
Posts 18WY, USA |
I like it, its intense, which is good. I'd like to read more  Amor Y Lagrimas |
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FloraScars Junior Member
since 2010-11-08
Posts 33VA, USA |
nice and deep, you must love this person alot, but this poem leaves me wondering if they love you as much as you do them? this line for some reason i really liked: "My love and your love will intertwine, and create not two hearts, but one." |
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