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Teen Poetry #9

Why So Perfect?

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2010-09-20 01:57 PM

Why do I have to
be so perfect?
Can't I just be me?
I never thought about
being perfect
'til you got a hold of me.

You rip my up.
You tear me down.
You break my heart.
You spin me round and round...

Babe, if I have to
be so perfect,
you ain't right for me.

Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-09-20 02:30 PM

You sure got that right! I learned so long ago, no one can make you do or be anything you don't want to be, unless you let them.

If they are trying to change you, that is not love.

Great job!

Words are weapons, toss them with care.
~ Mysteria ~

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

2 posted 2010-10-04 02:23 PM

Thank you, Mysteria.
~UNTAMEDelegance

Misa: I can't imagine a world without Light!
L: Yes, that would be dark.

Prats
Member

since 2010-12-16

Posts 74

3 posted 2010-12-19 06:40 AM

this is a nice poem... it wonderfully expresses that one shouldn't change oneself...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

4 posted 2011-01-02 05:54 AM

I think I commented on this in the Mains. Really like this piece.

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