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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2010-09-10 05:38 AM



So ATM i'm no longer talking to my little brother..

He's been my world for so long, but after an argument with my dad he's now wiped contact with all my family, myself included...

________


Almost Called Your Number Today..
But Somehow The Urge Just Faded Away..
As All Those Hurtful Words You’d Said
Just Rolled Around Up In My Head.

I Had Your Back, Hell You Had Mine
But We Couldn’t Make It Through This Time
Too Many Words, One Long Goodbye
Thats All There Is For You And I

But Every Memory Cuts Me Deep
Every time I Even Try To Sleep
I Miss Your Voice, Your Sinful Smile
What I’d Give To See You For Awhile

There’s Nothing Left For Me To Say
I Wish It Didn’t Have To End This Way
But You’ve Made Your Choice And I’ll Be Fine
Trapped In The Scraps & Pieces You’ve Left Behind

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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2010-09-10 05:45 PM


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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Stitches
Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
United Kingdom
2 posted 2010-09-16 07:55 AM


Lovely poem, though I'd change the way it's capitalised.

Maybe you should call him.

Good luck. <3

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

UNTAMEDelegance
Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon
3 posted 2010-10-04 02:27 PM


This makes me want to cry. I can't even imagine the pain you must be feeling!... I want to say something comforting, but I don't know what to say, other than that maybe things will work out in the end and you will be able to get past this as a family not torn apart.
                  ~UNTAMEDelegance

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