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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
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0 posted 2010-09-02 10:52 PM


I'm sorry, this really isn't good...at all. And the title is horrid. But I'm starting not to care anymore. My writing has gone down hill so much, and this almost didn't come out. But I needed to write what I was feeling...I can't hold it in any longer.



I am free falling
into the arms of love.
Feelings that were burried long ago,
are now awake and burning.

There are words that my lips hold,
secrets for only you, my dear.
There are things you should know about me,
before we begin to live.

My life before this was a destruction,
that slowly rebuilt itself.
The walls of self-esteem were crumbled,
but now they stand strong.

I can tell you stories about my life,
and how it's been changed for the good.
But will you help me stay this way...
will you help me stay strong..?

My life before you was a lie.
That smile was a pin-up girl,
someone screaming to be heard.
But I'm okay with being backround noise now.

I want to show you things I've never seen,
and learn what our destiny is.
We are who we're meant to be,
let's learn together, my love.


julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

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Prats
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since 2010-12-16
Posts 74

1 posted 2010-12-19 06:42 AM


your way of expression is wonderful... it's a touching poem... and JFYI I like the title...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
2 posted 2010-12-19 02:26 PM


Thank you very much, it means alot to me that someone likes it

julianna

"Many of the most significant moments in our lives come not because it all went right, but because it all fell apart." - Rob Bell

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2011-01-01 08:57 AM


Are you kidding? This was so very very beautiful and full of wondrous meaning! Loved it!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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